camp writing

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

Tugging & pulling on the rope others start to rise up in the air. When its finally my turn I get called over to suit up. Climbing the ladder I get really bad thoughts but once I got up I knew I was going to be fine.


Higher and higher the harness strangles me as it clings to my throat feeling like I'm going to through up. Shoot down lower and lower I get the sick feeling like I'm shooting down a super steep hill. flying around like a bird I think I am going to fall or the the tall bulky trees.


cold shivering water making me freeze to death. I feel like i might drown as my body temperature gets lower and lower. Tipping and dunking I get stranded on my raft as I slowly sink. Blowing and splashing the wind slightly changes as I swim around with my friends. crunch I feel the cold wet dirt melting between my toes as I walk around.